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VOLUME 11 NUMBER 1

JAN 2009

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A Famous Chinese Poem

Often misunderstood By Readers

AN ARTICLE BY

VU DINH DINH

 

VU DINH DINH was born and grew up in Vietnam. Pursuing higher education he came to the US in 1956 and attended the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill, University of Chicago, and University of Hawaii where he obtained his Ph.D. He was recipient of an East-West Center Grant, a National Endowment for the Humanities Grant, and a National Science Foundation Honorable Mention Award, and having served as Senior Heath Planner with the Houston Department of Health and Human Services, taught at the college level, and had scientific research works published in international journals.

There is nothing more embarrassing than printing a poem, which was thought to have been temporarily forgotten, but found to have been  a subject of active discussion among Vietnamese poetry lovers abroad.  I am talking about the poem Feng Qiao Ye Bo (Phong Kiều Dạ Bạc) or Anchored at Night by Maple Bridge by Zhang Ji (Trương Kế) I introduced in the first issue of THE BRIDGE.  Shortly after the release of the newsletter I received phone calls, e-mails, and letters from friends, who commented on the poem, inquired about the authorship of the translation of the poem into Vietnamese, and informed me of the existence of several articles, which had appeared in print or on electronic screen, written on the subject.

Sherry Garland, an award-winning author wrote: Thank you for the poetry newsletter.  I enjoyed reading it very much. . . There is something about the poem that is driving me crazy though if the moon has set, wouldnt that make it morning (not midnight)? Unless he (Zhang Ji) is referring to a tiny sliver of moon.  And crows are day birds, arent they?  I dont think they would be cawing at midnight.
 
You are right, Sherry.  The translators including myself misinterpreted the term ye ban,  which literally means midnight.  We are lured by the simple equivalency of Chinese and English.  Ye = night and ban = half.  Thus,ye ban becomes midnight.  However,  after read-ing Father Anthony Trần Văn Kiệms Sino-Vietnamese Dictionary (unpublished) I found out that in the old days we perceived time differently.  We devided night into five periods, each is called canh meaning watch.  First watch or Canh Tuất (Dog Watch) begins at 7 p.m. and ends at 9 p.m.  Second watch or Canh Hợi (Pig Watch) continues from 9 p.m. to 11 p.m.  Third Watch or Canh T (Mouse Watch) spans from 11 p.m. to 1 a.m. the next day.  Fourth watch or Canh Sửu (Buffalo Watch) resumes at 1 a.m. and terminates at 3 a.m. Fifth watch or Canh Dần (Tiger Watch) starts at 3 a.m. and winds up for the night at 5 a.m.  The concept of midnight is not there.  To refer to a point in time that the English language calls midnight, we use the phrase chnh T, meaning principal Mouse Watch.  The closest translation of ye ban that I can come up with is late into the night or in the wee hours of the morning.

We do not know when Zhang Ji composed Anchored at Night by Maple Bridge.  But, based on scanty information revealed in the poem such as cold weather,  moon setting,  difficulty to sleep in the wee hours of the morning I make an educated guess that Zhang Ji did it around two oclock in the morning (during the Buffalo Watch), between the seventh and tenth day of November of the lunar calendar (or mid-December of the Gregorian calendar), when crescent moon was visible on a clear day. In agricultural society November is the period during which people take time off from  work at the end of the harvest season to visit friends and relatives.

Like Sherry Vietnamese writers not only question the unnatural behavior of crows cawing at night but also ask if the phrases wu te (crows cawing) and chou mian (sorrowful dream) simply refer to the names of two mountains nearby as some Chinese writers ascertained in the literature and painters drew them from imagi-nation.  In this case these phrases should be written in capital letters as Wu Te  and Chou Mian.  Two Vietnamese authors Vn Trnh and Hải Đ already wrote two scholarly articles in Vietnamese in response to these questions.  For the benefits of English-speaking readers, I have permission to reproduce below an ela-borate, well-documented study of the subject written by  Nguyễn Quảng Tun, a Nm specialist, who had actually gone to Suzhou to investigate the issues.

 
Visiting Han Shan Temple for a Better Understanding of
 Anchored at Night by Maple Bridge by Zhang Ji (1)

                                                 by  Nguyễn Quảng Tun

Recently I had an opportunity to pay a special visit to Han Shan Temple in the city of Suzhou, China to get a better understanding of the famous poem Feng Qiao Ye Bo (An-chored at Night by Maple Bridge) .   I wanted to see with my own eyes the landscape around the temple and gather first-hand information related to the poem in order to shed light on some controversies, which have been circulated with regards to the meanings of two ambiguous expressions in the poem, as well as to gain insight into the intended thought of this eighth century Chinese author.

Han Shan Temple was built during the Liang dynasty (502-557 A.D.) and initially named Miaoli.  Later, it was changed to Feng Qiao because of its proximity to Feng Bridge.  Until the Tang dynasty when two zen buddhists by the name of Han Shan and Shi De came to serve in the temple as priors,  the temple took the name of one of these resident monks.  During the Sung period a seven-storied pagoda was  added to the temple, which prompted King Song Ren Zong to give it a new name Pu Minh Chan Yuan (The All Bright Zen Court).  The temple had since undergone several renovations that made the original architechtural design unrecognizable.  In 1992,  a five-storied pagoda was constructed to replace the old one, which at that time was already heavily damaged.

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Nguyễn Quảng Tun in front of the
five-storied pagoda in Han Shan Temple.

Comparing to other temples in the city of    Suzhou in particular and in China as a whole, Han Shan Temple does not surpass them in architechtural beauty but has been made famous as a tourist attraction thanks to Zhang Jis poem.

The poem was engraved on a stele, which still stands in the temple.  Printed below is the poem in both Chinese characters and in romanized form complete with diacritical marks.  This modern form of writing is called Pinyin and designed to cater mainly to Western readers.  Unfortunately, because of the required labor to add diacritical marks to vowels,  the other writing of Pinyin in this text does not carry tonal accents.


 
           Fēng Qiao Y B 
                                                  
           Yu lu wū t shuāng măn tiān
           Jiāng fēng y huo du cho min
           Gū sū chng wi hn shān s
           Y bn zhōng shēng do k chun

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(A draft of the poem for engravement on stele c. 1906)

This poem has been translated into English by several authors.  The latest is rendered by Innes Herdan.


Anchored at Night by Maple Bridge  (2)

Moon sets, crows caw, sky is full of frost;
River maples, fishing-boat lights break through my troubled sleep.
Beyond the city of Suzhou lies Han Shan monastery,
At midnight the clang of the bell reaches the travellers boat.


Although consisting of only four lines of twenty-eight words, the poem has been the subject of controversies for centuries without satisfactory answers.  The following essay will examine these issues one by one with literary evidence  and on-site observations to support my contentions.

Verse One:  One argument states that wu ti could be the name of a mountain or village.  Therefore, it should be read as Yue/ luo Wu Ti shuang man tian and understood to mean The moon sets over Wu Ti mountain/village amid a misty sky.  Thus, Wu Ti is no longer the cries of crows but has become a geographical name.  To support this line of interpretation it is argued that at night crows do not caw.  However, many researchers of Tang poetry do not accept this interpretation.  They maintained that crows did caw at night, though not as common.

In Chinese poetry,  the expression wu ti can be found in Li Bais poem Wu Ye Ti (Crows Caw at Night) and in a poem by Jin Shi entitled Zi shu (Autobiography), in which a verse reads: Nightly, the cries of crows are heard outside the deserted  chamber.  In Vietnam, the same idea is found expressed in Quch Tấns poem Hearing Crows Caw in an Autumn Evening.  The poet recalled how he came to compose it:  It was an evening of late autumn in the year Đinh Mo (1927), moonlight being dim.  As I was walking home along Cồn river from An Thi wharf, I came to a deserted area where I was startled by the cries of a flock of crows.  The cries were so scary, so sinister.  This experience reminded Quch Tấn of Feng Qiao wharf in Zhang Jis poem and he wrote: At Feng Qiao wharf the sky is veiled with mist.  Evidently, crows are shown to have cawed at night but rarely.

Furthermore,  if we are to understand that the first line is to describe the moon setting  over Wu Ti mountain or village,  the mountain or village in question must be very far in the distant horizon and not conceivably near the wharf.

For these reasons the suggested way of reading the first line as Yue/ luo Wi Ti shuang man tian is not logical.  Reference works such as Tang Shi Zhu Jie (Tang Poetry Annotations) and Qian Jia Shi Zhu Zie (A Collection of Poems by a Thousand Poets with Annotations) did not provide such interpretation.

Verse Two:  The second verse has also become a subject of controversy.  It is based on a statement by Mao Xian Shu of the Qing dynasty, which says: In Suzhou across from Han Shan Temple there is a mountain called Chou Mian.  Thus, the verse Jiang feng yu huo dui chou mian cannot be interpreted to mean The maple-trees along the river and the twinkling lights from fishing boats make him homesick and unable to sleep.

This line of interpretation was rejected by Zhang Wei Ming, the author of Han Shan Temple (3).  He contended that since three (1st, 3rd, and 4th ) of the four verses in the poem have already been used to describe the scenery, the remaining verse (2nd) should be used to express the authors feelings. 

The argument by Zhang makes sense.  The two reference works I cited above concurred with Zhangs opinion and explained the term chou mian to mean sorrow causing sleeplessness.  Only in Hu Tu Qian Jia Shi (4) (An Illustrated Collection of Poems by a Thousand Poets) did Zhong Bai Jing interprete it to be the name of a mountain.  The following lengthy quotation is from Zhongs writing:

 Jiang Feng is the name of the market-place. Chou Mian is the name of a mountain.  Yu huo refers to the lights of fishing boats, Gu Su Cheng is the name of Suzhou city.  Han Shan is the name of a temple with a famous buddha statue, yue luo wu ti means deep into the night.  It was a foggy night.  Lights from fishing boats in front of Jiang feng market-place twinkled across from Chu Mian mountain.  Meantime, the bell from Han Shan Temple resounded as far as the poets boat at Feng Qiao wharf.  Such was the nocturnal scenery.

I suspect that Zhong Bai Jing had never been to Han Shan Temple, thus making him come up with such misinterpretations.  As a matter of fact, on one side of the temple there is only one market-place named Feng Qiao, now called Feng Qiao Street.  Inside the temple there is only a hall (Han Shi Hall), where an altar dedicated to the two monks, Han Shan (5) and Shi De, is installed.  Han Shan is not the name of a buddha and chou mian is not the name of some mountain nearby.

During my visit to the temple and from Feng Qiao wharf next to the Grand Canal I saw no mountains in the surrounding.  I heard of Ling Yan Mt., Tien Ping Mt., Tian Chi Mt., Shang Fang Mt., Deng Wei Mt., Shizi Mt., Hengshan Mt., and Heshan Mt., all of which are supposedly located far away.  None of them could be detected by sight.

Then, if Zhang Ji sat in his boat and looked out to view the landscape, he could only see the maple-trees, lights from the fishing boats and not  Chou Mian Mt., which was not there on the other side of the river as suggested.  Probably the term shan, which means mountain in the name Han Shan Temple (Cold Mountain Temple) misled people into believing that there must be a mountain nearby and Chinese artists, who helped to illustrate the poem, drew mountains  around the temple accordingly.

The photo that I took shows Feng Qiao Wharf with boats cruising in the canal, the bridge leading to Tie Ling Pass, and the Po Ming Pagoda behind Han Shan Temple.  It de-monstrates the erroneous interpretation of  Chinese painters whose works are often taken for granted.

 

The facts are clear and the standard books Tang Shi San Bo Shou (Three Hundred Poems of the Tang Dynasty) and Qian Jia Shi Zhu Zie correctly explain the verse Jiang feng yu huo dui chou mian to mean Maples on the riverside and lights from fishing boats make me feel sad and unable to sleep.
 

Verses Three and Four:

Gu su sheng wai Han Shan si,
Ye ban zhong shen dao ke chuan.
(Beyond the city of Suzhou lies Han Shan monastery,
At midnight the clang of the bell reaches the travellers boat.)

           

These two lines similarly have given rise to questions because, as they said, at midnight temple bell is not ordinarily rung.  However, there are on this issue several comments made by well-known Chinese writers, which are worth mentioning.  Ou Yang Xiu argued that poets were usually concerned with the beauty of the verse at the expense of logical reasoning.  The practice consequently resulted in a linguistic flaw.  Chu Yao wrote in Tang Shi San Bo Shou Du Ben that readers of later generations for lack of anything else to say relied too much on the unlikeliness of bell sound at midnight to find fault with the poem.  Ye Shao Yun in his Shi Lin Shi Hua contended that those who had never been to Wu Zhong (Suzhou) temples did not know that in those days they did ring  bell at midnight.

Taking into consideration these remarks, I am of the opinion that bell sound although is not commonly heard at midnight can happen on occasions when special ceremonies are conducted.  For this reason poets from the Song dynasty onward who passed by Feng Qiao Wharf always remembered Zhang Ji through his description  of  moon setting, crow cawing, and midnight bell.

As testimonies to the inspiration evoked by Zhang Jis poem I present below a collection of verses related to the subject taken from various poems by famous writers since the Song dynasty.

From Su Feng Bridge by Lu You of Song dynasty:

            Qi nian bu dao Feng Qiao si,
             Ke zhen yi ran ban ye zhong.
             (Returning to Feng Qiao Temple after seven years,
             I now spend the night in this alien place finding it unchanged
             as I hear the bell ring at midnight.)

From Feng Bridge by Sun Di also of Song dynasty:

            Wu ti ye luo qiao bian si,
            Yi zhen you wen ban ye zhong.
            (Crows caw, moon sets, and the bridge stands by the temple.
            Sleeping with my head on the pillow, I still hear the midnight bell.)

From Bo Chang Men by Gu Zhong Ying of Yuan dynasty:

            Xi feng zhi zai Han Shan si,
            Chang song zhong sheng jiao ke mian.
            (Because of the west wind from Han Shan Temple
            The midnight bell is carried far away stirring the visitors sleep.)

From Feng Bridge by Gao Kai of Ming dynasty:

            Ji du jing wo yi Zhang Ji,
            Wu ti yue luo you zhong sheng.
            (Each time passing by Feng Bridge
            I remember Zhang Ji with his crows cawing, moon setting,
and midnight bell.)

From Feng Bridge by Wen Zheng Ming of Ming dynasty:

            Shui ming ren jing jiang cheng gu,
            Yi ran luo yue ti shuang wu.
            (Water is limpid, the mind tranquil, and Jiang township quiet.
            Moon sets, crows caw in mist  - things havent changed.)

These verses prove that Chinese poets in the past recalled the occurrence of crows cawing at night, the romantic view of moon setting amid a cold night, and the hearing of midnight bell as something quite natural.  Zhang Ji described  truthfully and vividly what happened on that historic evening.  He left behind a remarkable literary work for us  to remember and enjoy.  I feel that we do not need to worry any more about the meaning of the poem.
 
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a visit to Feng Qiao Wharf is a must, if we want to get a full understanding of Feng Qiao Ye Bo.  Otherwise it would be easy to misinterprete the intention of the author and commit errors in illustration.  Once more I want to stress that near Feng Qiao Wharf and Han Shan Temple there are no visible mountains that are named either Chou Mian or Wu Ti.  If these words are interpreted as geographical names the poem
will no longer have its poetic appeal.
 
 
          FOOTNOTES

          1.  Zhang Ji (Zhang Wenchang) :  Poet of the Tang Dynasty.  He was born around 756 in
               Wujang, N. Anhuei and in about 799 he was awarded a doctoral degree. He was known
               for his poem Feng Qiao Ye Bo.

          2.  Innes Herdan,  The Three Hundred Tang Poems ,  new translations illustrated by
         Chiang Yee, Taipei, Taiwan: The Far East Book Co., Ltd., 2000, p. 676.

          3.  Han Shan Ti:  Work compiled by Zhang Wei Ming, Size: 11 x 16.5cm 158 pages,
         published by Gu Wu Xuan in Suzhou in 1993.

          4.  Hui Tu Qian Jia Shi (Illustrated Collection of Poems by a Thousand Poets) Publishing
               House: Shang Yang Ri Xin Shu Zhuang Shi Yin Shang Yang, Beijing, China.
               The year of publication is not mentioned.  It could be in the 19th or early 20th century.

          5.  Han Shan: A monk poet of the Tang dynasty who lived near Qian Tai Mt. with his fellow
                monk Shi De.  Legend has it that Han Shan was the reincarnation of Wen Zhu
                Bodhisattva and Shi De of Pu Xian Bodhisattva.  Works by Han Shan were later
                collected in Han Shan Shi Ji.

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Now that the controversies have been properly addressed,  it is my turn to answer lingering questions such as why I did not print the transliteration of the poem into Hn-Việt in the first issue of THE BRIDGE, and why I said there was error in attribution of authorship of the translation of the poem into Vietnamese to Tản Đ.

On the first question I must apologize for the oversight.  I do not have bias towards Hn-Việt.  It is the backbone of our literature.  Our language would not have been as rich and versatile as it is today without Hn-Việt.  I did have the version on hand when I typed the newsletter.  But, after working with the Chinese version, the Pinyin version, the Vietnamese translation, and three different English translat-ions I totally forgot about the Hn-Việt version.  Or, perhaps Alzheimer has unknowingly been creeping in. 

As a matter of fact, from conversations with my friends, verbally or via Internet, I was surprised to discover that they remembered Zhang Jis poem through the Hn-Việt title Phong Kiều Dạ Bạc.  Nobody ever mentioned to me the title in present-day Vietnamese.  Perhaps the translation into Đm Đậu Thuyền Ở Bến Phong Kiều was too long to be acceptable and the Hn-Việt title was expressive enough to relate to the poem.  Furthermore, some of my friends could quote the poem for me in Hn-Việt without hesitation.  This shows how deeply Vietnamese appreciate the poem although it is not in their own language.  So, here is the Hn-Việt version of the poem:

Phong Kiều Dạ Bạc

Nguyệt lạc đề sương mn thin,
Giang phong ngư hỏa đối sầu min.
C T thnh ngoại Hn San tự,
Dạ bn chung thanh đo khch thuyền.

As to the authorship of the translation of this poem into present-day Vietnamese I relied on an article by Nguyễn Quảng Tun printed in Tản Đ Ton Tập (Complete Works of Tản Đ).  He pointed out that the error was committed when Trần Trọng San attributed the translation to Tản Đ in his book Thơ Đường (Tang Poetry), Part I, published in Saigon in 1957.  Later on the mistake was perpetuated by L Văn Hng in his book Việt Nam Văn Chương Trch Diễm (Vietnamese Selected Literary Works) published in Chợ Lớn in 1961.  The version that they printed reads as follows:

Trăng t tiếng quạ ku sương,
Lửa chi cy bến sầu vương giấc hồ.
Thuyền ai đậu bến C T,
Nửa đm nghe tiếng chung cha Hn San.

    This is the version that most of us remember.  However, as early as 1942 Đẩu Tiếp Nguyễn Văn Đề already printed a translation of the poem in his book Trong 99 Chp Ni (Among 99  Mountain Tops) published by Tn Việt in Hanoi, in which he attributed the authorship to Nguyễn Hm Ninh (1808-1867), a contemporary of Cao B Qut.  Tản Đ was born much later after these nineteeth century poets. Nguyễn Hm Ninhs versions reads:

Đm Đậu Thuyền Ở Bến Phong Kiều

Quạ ku, trăng lặn, trời sương,
Lửa chi le li sầu vương giấc hồ.
Thuyền ai đậu bến C T,
Nửa đm nghe tiếng chung cha Hn San.

Apparently, the original translation by Nguyễn Hm Ninh had been modified and was attributed to Tản Đ.  It is to be noted that the earliest collection of Tản Đ works Tản Đ Văn Vận did not have this translated poem. Other publications simply listed the author of the translation as unknown.

VU DINH DINH

 

 

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